"Quit Crying and do Something" (this is my answer to the so called website Free Republic?,right)

First of all the title is "Sirius
Future" and not "Sirius Future Zot"
Is that editing, unprofessional mistake
Or just wanting to get involved in
A excellent Poem, A poem is imaginative
Creative and with meter A good Poem
That doesn't create a discussion didn't
Do it's job and those that want to
Throw in the towel that's fine or
If you want to jump Ship your
Choice and your right have a great
Day and a nice swim, free republic Zott
Change it to we pick choose and change
Better said and I can't wait till my
suspension is up Free Republic is throwing
A Childish temper tan tram and doesn't
Want to post this one so I'm posting
This one Please come back when you want
To Play some more, and Have a great Day
Tio Al